Tuần này Ce Phan biên soạn các bài học dành cho các lớp học IELTS đang học tới chủ đề Mối quan hệ của con người và tự nhiên (Our relationship with nature). Đây là bài kế tiếp trong các bài học IELTS Writing đã được đăng lên hệ thống học tiếng Anh Timeline Learning.

Question 1:
Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals.
Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not?

Outlines:

[Introduction]

You should write two sentence with these ideas

-  Introduce the topic (paraphrase the statement from the question)

-  Give the general answer for the question.

Some useful phrases:

- increasing demands of ...: ngày càng tăng lên nhu cầu trong (của) ...
- (to) strain the existing resources:  làm căng thẳng (nguy hại) đến nguồn tài nguyên
- For this elevated demands for ...: Với nhu cầu đòi hỏi cao cho (việc) ...
- (to) reserve for ...: dự phòng/ bảo tồn cho ...
- (to) encroach the jungles: xâm lấn rừng
- (be) fatal : gây chết người, gây tử vong 
- the ecological & economical impacts: những sự tác động về sinh thái và kinh tế
-no end for human's needs: không có điểm kết thúc cho nhu cầu của con người (sự đòi hỏi vô tận)

[Body]

I approach this question as the view of saving living space for endangered animals so that this is the "NO" body which I will divide into two paragraphs. The first one is for the necessarity of protecting the animal habitats and the second is for the adjustment of human's way of life. 

[Paragraph 1]

- Idea for the topic sentence: Plants and animals are the foundation of healthy ecosystem which humans depend on

 + supporting idea 1: forests to purify the air, clean the water

 + supporting idea 2: forests to protects people from the sun's harmful ultraviolet rays

 + supporting idea 3: forests to mitigate drought and floods and many more. 

 + supporting idea 4: plants and animals are responsible for variety of useful medications. 

[Paragraph 2]

- Idea for the topic sentence: The problem of land for more housing and industries should be solved with more constructive ways.

 + supporting idea 1: Cities can be designed and planned with modern technology to use optimum land 

 + supporting idea 2: Take Singapore as an exmaple 

 + stress your idea: Both humans and animals thrive in harmony with constructive methods used to build modern cities.

[Conclusion] 

- Summarise the ideas or stress on the highlights of your argument.

- Confirm again your statement 

 

Question 2
Damage to the environment is an inevitable consequence of worldwide improvements in the standard of living.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

 

Outlines:

[Introduction]

You should write two sentence with these ideas

-  Introduce the topic (paraphrase the statement from the question)

-  Give the general answer for the question.

[Body]

- Idea for the topic sentence 1: People choose to focus on improving the standard of living without any concern of their surrounding environment. 

 

- Idea for the topic sentence 2: The sustainability of humankind development really depends on how the government of each country hold the notion about the relationship between human and nature. 

[Conclusion] 

- Summarise the ideas or stress on the highlights of your argument.

- Confirm again your statement 

Biên soạn: Ce Phan